Workshopping the Script

Been furiously working on last minute changes to the script. I really want to show the best dialogue that I can at this point. I've been poring over the dialogue, really trying to snap it up, really thinking about what each character is thinking (and therefore translating) with their body language as well as dialogue. It's as if you must be able to breathe with your character. If you don't know where his/her breath is, you can't time the dialogue. This may seem like a weird thing, but my experience has borne this out. Breath is also timing, and when you see the scene you see the timing which includes their breath.

I'll no after Sundayif I'm off in my tempo...